Fighting A Losing Battle

You know all the right words to say 

Just when I’m about to walk away

I wanted a fight, I needed back my pride 

Why do you keep on winning even when I’m right

I had all my reason and points of attack

Had the perfect strategy until I fell into your trap 

Physical pain, I would have gladly taken that 

Just please don’t hurt my heart, it has had enough 

You used love against me and I could not comprehend 

How could you be so heartless? I had nothing in my defense

The worst is that when I came to this battlefield I came prepared 

But still found myself dumbfounded when I saw you right there

You were supposed to rescue me just like any other knight 

But instead your shining armor lost all its light 

My hero turned to be a villain, my prince turned to be in disguise 

You had the perfect props, you said the perfect lies

And I fell, I just fell through it all

I still kept on going in even when you were building your walls 

Now I’m left in this battlefield, feeling used and alone 

Crying, fading, my whole existence is gone 

07.21.12 

12:19 AM


Reviews

[KurKota]

Nice writing, but disturbing to see another woman having placed her whole existence on the opinion of some guy. Stop doing that... your identity is your own irregardless of some guy that may or not have the same level of commitment. Be your own person.... and be part of a larger self, by your very good writing ability. You have a lot to offer.