Wishes

Wishes

A Poem by jane7z

Wish

If I were with you
I would bear hug you until
you begged for mercy

If I were with you we would sing kar roakee
dance all night long
no matter who was watching

If I were with you
I would drag you to my
favorite places
watching your face as you
alight in wonder

If I were with you
I would put aside our
differences, hurts
opinions
for a little while

If I were with you
we would drink vino
into the night

If I were with you I would
laugh myself silly until dawn
then walk through quiet streets
awakening the day

If I were with you
the best of you
the best of me
would come out and play


© 2013 jane7z


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That's called love. This reflects how you do love someone right from the depth of your heart. Yes, you can drag him at your fav. places wherever you want to and am sure he'd love to drag by you because I hope he knows he lucky he'd be to be dragged by you until the dawn.

Rating : 100/100!
Note : Lovely write!

Posted 10 Years Ago


A really nice and sentimental piece

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is sweet and lovely. A great piece:-D

Posted 10 Years Ago


That was a sweet and thought full wish... sigh

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on December 19, 2013
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jane7z
jane7z

Denver, CO



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