A Perfect Day

The sky is blue and it's a perfect day,
Nothing could ruin it in anyway,
The grass is green and the clouds are white,
All tying together to make it just right,
The children are laughing not caring at all,
Because coming up soon, the leaves will fall,
So just sit back and listen to the birds sing,
Because you know that soon the school bell will ring.

Reviews

[Tree Bark]

it sounds so relaxing and nice!!

[Lively]

Cute..

[WriteWiz99]

Wow that really sounds like the perfect day:)! To bad that doesn't happen too often :(. I can't believe you didn't tell me to read this! Heehee

[Sujash I. Purna]

This poem reminds me of days when I was a wee little kid! Really adorable piece of poetry! Keep it up! :)

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This is wonderful, enjoyed this

[xxxxSweetDreamsxxxx]

really good :)