Good morning.

I could lay with you forever and a while

Just to wake up and see you smile.

Your heart beats under my fingertips

As I kiss your velvet crimson lips.

A vision in white the angels do sing

As our heart and our soul become one thing.

You slowly awake and kiss my cheek

As the stars get some sleep way down in the creek.

Reviews

[Maglia Weaver Twill]

Sweet, I like "I could lay with you forever and a while/Just to wake up and see you smile" that is sweet, it seems like the "velvet crimson lips' must be quite seductive. The "heart and soul becom[ing] one thing" is what I thought love to be like or supposed to be, and I might understand it might not in terms of life on this earth as we know it, but I have always liked that idea that the "heart and soul" could become one thing

[Jamie]

Thank you :)

[Jen]

Wow! a short and beautiful rhyming poem with emotions pouring out on the reader's minds, telling how love can be so beautiful, breathing and heavenly... Thank You Jamie, for sharing this excellent poem here. Keep it up!

[Jamie]

Thank you very much I appreciate it :)

[Awfulhabits]

your the first person ive read anything from on here. I am glad to read some amazing work. Where i come from people do not write like me !! So reading your work is comforting !!! your amazing!!!

[Jamie]

Thank you so much!! :) I shall review your work :) Much appreciated :D

[Matching Socks]

This is simply romantic.
A really sweet and beautiful love poem. :)

[Jamie]

Thank you Ana :) xx

[Matching Socks]

You're welcome.

[MaryOwais]

This is a truly beautiful poem! :)

[Jamie]

Thank you :)