If Only

If Only

A Poem by Jamie
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One of my many poems I have wrote.

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If only the skies would understand

Exactly what this world demands

It wouldn't be so blue

The clouds would not be so white

The sun would never shine it would always be moonlight.


If only she listened to what I had said

I wouldn't have found her alone in her bed

With crimson stained wrists and her eyes open wide

I held her in my arms and screamed to the sky why oh why.


If only the skies would understand

Exactly what this world demands

It wouldn't be so blue

The clouds would not be so white

The sun would never shine it would always be moonlight.


If only this glass would never empty

If only this bar would never close

If only my heart would stop beating

I would be with her forever more.

© 2014 Jamie


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You write well very nice write :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jamie

10 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Emotion packed and haunting. I liked it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jamie

10 Years Ago

Many thanks :)

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Jamie
Jamie

Barnsley, United Kingdom



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