Sadness

Sadness

A Poem by Somebody you've already forgoten
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Sad but turns good

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People are alone in their loneliness
Even when their surrounded by others
There drowning in a sea of despair
Made from their own tears
How did you get their you ask.?
Well they where sailing through the sea
And someone or something
Crashed their boat of happiness and love
And now their drowning
Sinking farther down through the cold hurtful sea of despair
They can see the sunshine on the surface
Oh how they wish they could swim towards it
But alas they are to cold and numb to move
As time goes on they either die a slow hurtful death
Or someone rescues them
Someone who has been in their place before
And survived
They reach your hand down and pull you up
They save you
Your no longer sinking
No longer dying
Thank you....

© 2010 Somebody you've already forgoten


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awh John.. Im gratful your still alive too. :] I dont know what i would do without u

Posted 14 Years Ago


I had someone jump in and save me once when I was drowning..I had been under for like a minute before he swam me to shore..I had to help him swim and paddle even though I had no strength left and I had swallowed a lot of water..I am alive and I'm grateful too. [=

Posted 14 Years Ago


this is awesome and amazing . . . I'm so glad I stopped by

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 18, 2010
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