just live

its a part two of just die and i have john to thank for the idea

Open your eyes

But keep your mouth closed

And just breath

Just observe

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Pick up your camera

Wind it up good

And click click click

Just watch it all through the lense

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Get your pencil

Write down what you want

And show anyone who dares to ask

Just put it all on paper

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Take all your feelings

Good or bad

And just tell someone all of it

But then just keep it between you two

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Be who you want

Just dont be a fake

Be unique and make people wonder

And just live

 

Author's Note

i just want to say thanks to John my soul bro

Reviews

[Vansgirlrocks]

omg Jamie
its great just like
the 1st one!

[Wunderlich]

Very nice. This is a good write. Nice job :D

[Emily B]

this is great work! positively charged :)

[Collect-Eye]

wow, Jamie..this is amazing..those two poems go together so well..very dynamic and thought provoking [=
even on its own, this piece moves well and has a lot of good contrast

and if anyone's wondering..i didn't help her w/ any of the words..just the idea for a continuation of the last piece..she wrote it all on her own

good stuff jamie..I love it!