just die

Shut your eyes

Close your mouth

Slit your wrists

and just bleed

______________________

Pick up your gun

Put it to your head

And pull the trigger

Bang

______________________

Get the pills

Get your water

And down them all

And just go to sleep

______________________

Climb the stairs all the way to the top

Just look down and see how far your gonna drop

Step off the ledge

And just fall

______________________

Take your time

But not to slow

Just let go just slip away

And just die

 

Author's Note

just thought of during skool and i really liked it how bout u. honest opinions please

Reviews

[~Mariposa Una Lila~]

oh honey, so full of hate....it hurts me to read this...one should never hate ones self...god made you special...thats what i think! x0x0x0x0x0

[Vansgirlrocks]

HOLY TALITO! (get it what Poky says. Hopefully you know who he is lol)
This is one hell of a good poem!!!
truely jealous that you thought of this!
this is a great write! OMG
favorite!!!

[Starting Over]

Wow I loved this... something I have been thorugh! Great flow and real grpping! Great job

[Wunderlich]

Pretty brutal. I really the flow of it too.