Inside

Dying inside

Crying inside

but I wont tell

You got a problem with this fine then just go to hell

Because I am not saying

And you aren't staying

Just let it be

Its all right with me if you dont see

I no longer care

And I will no longer share

Well not with you

So f**k you

No more long deep conversations

Because as far as you know

I am alright

But truth be told I am not alright

Dying inside

Crying inside

But you will never know

Because I wont tell

 

Author's Note

I started rhyming but then i sort of stopped cause it got hard

Reviews

[Emily B]

rhyming is way over-rated

let your words come out the way they want to . . .

they may spill, they may gush, they may trickle, they may seep, it may be messy, but let the words go where they want to . . . always more room out than in.

[Chaya Prasad]

i love to read your writing it's so better than mine!!
you know i am ALWAYS here for you!!

[Collect-Eye]

always remember, soul sister..
dying inside is part of the rebirth process
I go through it pretty often too
it's part of being human

your true friends care alot about you
and want to see you happy

keep the faith

if it will help to share your burden I will

anger and honesty about how you feel is ok
just keep trying new ways to be happy

You can break free from this feeling

i believe in you [=

PS--rhyming is overrated

[Vansgirlrocks]

awww I want to cry
and listen to ur problems!!
why do you think that
I'm here for lol =)
this is so emotional
makes me want to cry =,(
but don't worry I wont
cry unless you tell me too =)

[Bryan A.]

Wow, Jamie... This is deep. Sort of sad, but really good.