off to see the wizard

I'm off to see the wizard

The wonderful wizard of oz

I will get a new heart

a new brain

and some coarage

I will get a new heart

because the one I have has gone black

I will get a new brain

because the one I have is coorupt with my thoughts

my terrible terrible thoughts

And I will get some coarage

because I simple lack it

I am off to see the wizard

The wonderful wizard of oz

I will get a new heart

a new brain

and some coarage

I am off to see the wizard

Reviews

[Collect-Eye]

it's all inside you Jamie..it only eludes you if you fail to search for it.
I'm glad to see you're still experimenting and writing and thinking.
My thoughts scare me sometimes..but it's ok

no worries..[=

[Chaya Prasad]

i really love this one
and it's kool how you included the wizard of oz
i loce the old movie u know..the one in black and white

[Vansgirlrocks]

nicely done Jamie!
liked how your compare
your feelings to the
wonderful wizard of oz
lol but anywayz good poem =)
btw I have never seen the movie!
i know its sad

[Frank F. Atanacio]

good play on words

[We are young.]

you right I did like it I love how you compared it to the wizard of oz, and my favorite part is I will get a new heart

because the one I have has gone black
Brillant