my thoughts

go away

leave me be

i want to be alone

*the door shuts*

I am alone

but then again no i am not

because now i have my thoughts

my never ending thoughts

racing threw my mind

every second of every day

they aren't always the same

but the all are related

so now i am alone with my thoughts

to long they come through my mind

how will i end this horrible madness

*picks up the gun and...*

BANG

quiet

finally

quiet

Author's Note

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Reviews

[CountGuile]

i liked your writing. Often the same thoughts here. can you do me a favor and see if my writing is posted; just joined the site want to make sure its working. Thanks

[The DuchessPoet]

I am absolutely stunned... I can't believe that a 13 year old could be such an incredible writer! The youth that are talented on this site is so amazing to me!

This is sensational!
Very well done, my talented friend, very well done!

Your friend and fan,
The Duchess

[Chaya Prasad]

wow you're becoming an INCREDIBLE writer!!

[Collect-Eye]

you have to embrace the madness and learn to use it and accept it..
But I've [almost] been where you are at the end of this poem..but I'm also still here.
It's powerful the way you wrote it..and it flows well..
Just remember...
a lot of people are too simple to be as crazy as us..I think it's a blessing.

[Vansgirlrocks]

wow Jaime.....
a little personal here....
-shocked face-
but its a good poem