sometimes

its not really a poem i am just sort of venting

Sometimes I bottle up my emotions

Well most of the time actually

I dont like to talk about them

Or my feelings

Its just how I am

And I dont need to change

Sometimes I want to scream shut up

Or its not all about you

I want to scream screw the whole f*****g world

But I dont cause Im quiet

And I dont like to draw attention to myself

But sometimes thats what i want to do

how about you?

 

 

 

Reviews

[Matthew D. Ford]

Wow! It's good that I accepted your offer as a friend! You're a female clone of me (just kidding). That was a great piece and it was very strong for a 13 year old girl. That's exactly how I feel sometimes, too! Great "venting", indeed. Such power!

[Samantha Ashley*]

I like this, and its how I am also I keep my feelings and emotions inside. I know I've always been like that, and its a mystery to me. Sometimes it can be a bad thing cause I have so many things on my mind and they just sit there and don't get talked about, and it drives me crazy to the point where I want to scream and just screw the world. You know.. But I like what you wrote it just reminded me of myself.