lies

Lies

Absolutly neccesary things in life

No matter who they hurt

We need them

We cant admit it but we all need them

One two three after that they come so easiely

They say lies are bad but its the truth that hurts

So many lies and soon you become immune almost cold

Your nothing but an empty shell just full of lies

All of it nothing matters anymore its not real

Just admit what you've become FAKE

Your a LIAR a cold hearted LIAR

Reviews

[Jeremiah Medina]

This is good, the prospect that we need lies, that with out them this would be a very different world...interesting...we all know those people who can do nothing but lie, your just sitting there thinking am i really supposed to believe this crap...pretty soon it gets to a point where you dont believe a single word they say and you wonder...why is this person like this....its interesting....

[[Dark]]

i like how you defined lies
you justified the word. you told what it meant.

you wrapped everything around that word, and gave it what it deserved. what everybody knew, and what everyone resents.

people always lie, as you stated, and you unraveled how despising it is, but how its something that cant be denied, something that cant be hidden, and how necessary it is

[Ally Baker]

wow. I must say with the title of this piece being "Lies" I was expecting it to be negative. But when i read this, it was alot more than that. it was a short piece, but packed with emotion. it was a really good read, keep up the good work. you're poem has alot of truth to it, i like that you added to the adage "the truth hurts" it was very creative and worked very well to help with the easy flow of the words in this poem. you have some talent and should continue to explore it, never giving up or limiting yourself.

~~Ally Baker