Want To Be Your Man

I want to write you a letter
Tell you without you in my life there's no meter
I want to sing you a song
Tell you wrapped up in my arms is where you belong
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I want to be you lover... be your man
Be your best friend... give you all that I can
Always there with an open hand
Want to be someone who you can talk to
... Just cause you can
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Want to be your fire... be your stars
The one that lights you up when you look into my eyes
The one that takes you places so high
Don't want you to come down... just want you to fly
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Want to cover you in body breeze
And give you love with endless tease
I'll take you places you only dreamed
My only goal... just to please
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I want to be your lover... be your man
Be your best friend... give you all that I can
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Want to be your fire... be your stars
Want to light you up... have you floating on clouds
Don't want you ever to come down... not while I'm around
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I want to be your lover... be your all
Be the the last thing you think of
... Before the final curtain falls...

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

I certainly know how this feels...an eloquent and poignant statement of devotion...nicely done :)

[Jumbo J]

Yeah and isn't a magic feeling?
Thanks so much for the kind comments... JJ

[Brittany Zedalis]

This is remarkably beautiful. Wonderful work.

[Jumbo J]

Hi Brittany,
thank you for your warmth... and your review, much appreciated... JJ xx

[Lyn Anderson]

A really nice write. I am a little jaded about men who give me poetry, but I am sure this one would go over well.

[Jumbo J]

Hi KLG,
after reading your story, I understand completely... I only started writing poetry about seven or so years ago... so unfortunately I never got to whoa anyone in my younger days with my words... but my wife loves them and that's all that really counts... thanks for the review... most appreciated... JJ xx

[melissa]

Love the poem keep up the great work i hope to buy your poems one day

[Jumbo J]

Hi Milissa,
thanks for the wonderful sentiments... hope I get to publish one day... Take care... JJ xx

[melissa]

You're welcome

[Shirlena]

You are getting to be a little too feisty for your skinny pants ;). How does your honey feel about this? Does she enjoy your new found friskiness or are you on the low about it and just decided to keep it confined to the pages? If not you might want to unleash this side on Jade...and she might show a little extra gratitude lol. This is some he man manly writing.

[Jumbo J]

Hi Sweetie... too feisty you think?
I'd better tone them down a bit then?... no you know that's not going to happen... you and I both know I write from the heart and it's just what comes out... I've got no control over content... just the delivery. Jade always get to read what I've written and I'm always very trustful with what sparks my emotions... ones like this... I read out loud to her so she gets the pauses just where there needed... so I can tell you, this side of me is unleashed and running wild... smile))))))))).
But you know me... tomorrow it could be all dark and gloomy again... so enjoy the sunshine while it lasts. love ya lady 'S' xx

[Aethereal]

This seems to be a poem about a man who wishes to set off the same love mood in her as she induced in him. I tried to express this thought in a nut shell by writing the following tiny gift song-poem which you may keep as your own. I used overlapping rhyme with 1/0/1/0/1/0/1 seven syllable meter where “1” is an accent, and “0” is a non-accent.

Let Me

Let me be the one who tempts
with a strong seductive tease,
or a manner that preempts
with emotions that appease.

[Jumbo J]

Hey Athereal,
sorry for the late reply my friend... I'm a tad time poor at the moment.
yeah, your right just trying to spark the flame and ignite the passion.
thanks a heap for your little gift... always so nice to see the other spark to consciousness...JJ

[Aethereal]

You're welcome! When we help each other to feel better then we tend to stay together for more of the same. Either the magic moods develop or they don't, but that isn't up to us. We can’t order our moods around as a tyrant would., for they are finicky little flowers. Perhaps it's up to Cupid. Cupid had better finish his Spring cleaning and get to shooting mood inducing arrows once again. Cupid‘s “Mid Summer’s Night Dream”

[Yellow Butterfly]

You can feel the pain of longing in this poetic write... I hope your words are reciprocated and she realises before it's too late


Wonderfully penned...

YB

[Jumbo J]

Thank you so much for the wonderful comments... and yeah, she knows she is my everything... just don't want to ever stop telling her.

truly appreciate the review... I'll be dropping by.

JJ. xx

[Yellow Butterfly]

Awwh your welcome.... she's a lucky lady... :O)

YB