Living in the present.

Living in the present.

A Poem by James Oren
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Simple thought I liked.

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I'm here living in the present.
Forgetting parts of my past
And moving on to the pleasant!

© 2010 James Oren


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short yet good. i like it, its hopeful. keep it up

Posted 14 Years Ago


How perfectly lovely! I'm usually not fond of very short poems because they often come up lacking somehow, but this one made me happy!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Lovely! Short and uplifting. I adore it!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very short little quip. You may want to separate the second line between past/and. It would give the poem more flow to it. The optimism in this brings me some hope for poets instead of reading loveless misery.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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