I don't know

I don't know

A Poem by JAMES
"

where does everybody think their going?

"

Everyone asks me

what are you doing today?

I say: "I don't know"

 

Someone once asked me

"Where do you wanna be?"

I say: "I don't know"

 

I ask them: "Where do you see yourself in 5 yrs?"

They answer: "I don't know"

 

I don't know what to say anymore

 

I feel empty inside and out and  people ask me:

"Why?"

 

I reply: "I don't know."

© 2011 JAMES


Author's Note

JAMES
I feel this way constantly.

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you are a good writer this is what i think people loose sight of what they want by what they need. sometimes the best answer we can give are selfs is i dont know because you may have your mind set on something but then you find something better. sometimes we say i dont know because we are scared to say what we arent sure will come to us. these are only my opinions but they seem logical to me.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Very good its simple but actually in life its hard to know what you want nice job though....

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is really good and true, I think we all think about this off and on.

Posted 12 Years Ago


You are a very good writer keep writing

Posted 12 Years Ago


Someday you will find what you do know. It's difficult to find though. Good write though, James.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you are a good writer this is what i think people loose sight of what they want by what they need. sometimes the best answer we can give are selfs is i dont know because you may have your mind set on something but then you find something better. sometimes we say i dont know because we are scared to say what we arent sure will come to us. these are only my opinions but they seem logical to me.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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JAMES

Oroville, CA



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