Hello Hippo

Here I have tried to describe my friend. Read it yourself to find out why I call him to a hippo.

 

Hello Hippo

 

Swinging his belly,

He sat on his chair,

Talking crap every now and there!

 

It made sense

To them who lent a ear,

Clearing doubts existing far and near.

 

Eating and sleeping

Are his favorite pastime,

Ask him, when he exercised last time??

 

But he is a darling,

A favorite of all.

Sure to find a friend in him helping one and all.

 

Just want to thank you my friend

For always being there.

 

-Jam

Author's Note

Ignore grammar problems plz :D

Reviews

[THINK-VESSEL]

That was really good :). When we describe a person in a true sense, we normally get deep into thoughts and languages. Grammer never comes as a priority :). So, it's cooool !

[Tuff Stuff]

fun, cute, and totally unexpected.
Made me laugh!
Writing a poem about a hippo? UNIQUE in every way.
humor is the way to go in order to really get the reader reading.
Hugs.
T.S.

[Raj]

"To them who lend a ear"

Here, "lend" could've been "lent"

"Ask him, when he exercised last time??"

This line takes the cake.

Now, the poem sounds and looks chic and sweet. That's a beautiful homage you have paid to your friend.

The sly humor makes it a good read and the vivid

[Tina]

oh oh......cute one! seems like it is truly inspired by "real life" ! ;-)

[fallenangel]

hehehe a genuine work n a fun poem, true from the heart n funny right from the start!