Even Jesus carried own cross (under yelling sky)

A smile of baby
under yelling sky
left his mother's skirt
guided by own heart
to seek lost desire.

I am forced to observe
I am forced to admire
Your beauty
Her beauty
Ours...
n` the flowers in the garden.

Next to me
you're standing
keep saying it`s over
looking so strictly
you don`t want my poems
throwing the vase on me
this is the end
n` I already miss you.

I know what you`re thinking about
I saw every piece of your Ghost
when we made love till Dawn
I know you want to stop me
but even Jesus carried own cross
I can not be saved.
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My name is Mr. Pajer and I have dedicated last 4 years of my life building my own style of writing. I am currently working on my first novel that is about duality of Universe, inner demons and true Love.
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Reviews

This one is very unique as PJ says, yes. A little different from the others, deeper, and thought provoking, I love the way how you can make yourself little for her mighty being, and that's something hauntingly beautiful. Great job!

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well..your style is unique and interesting to read..the commentary is modern and poignant as well as provocative..the title is wonderful :)