Lesson 1: Ghost losing the battle with inner demons

Try to resist. Try to forget. Learn to be "normal". Learn to stop thinking what does "normal" actually mean.

For the sake of invisible one
her lost temperature of passion
forbidden words are coming up
counting unknown distance
between us
between us

Hear the wisdom of new dawn
just before the next reboot
before new level begins
it might feel unpleasant
unplugged from the Stream
lost in hunger of darkness
just before the next reboot
great damage off the pages
left with no words to waste
gloomy clouds praying for the rain
demons checking their weapons
And I am waiting there
I am so patiently waiting
for a head shot.

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Author's Note

ignore grammar problems :-/

Reviews

[Jakub Pajer]

You`re right but also a bit (just a little bit) wrong, because there`s more than rebirth.
....I don`t wish to disclose my intention, I wish to create the chain of thoughts and emotions inside readers.

Have a beautiful day and thank you for your review!

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this is intriguing in its ambiguity..could reboot be a metaphor for rebirth..that fact that you use unplugged and new level could indeed represent this.. interesting work.

Oooh this is so deep, as I feel every word of your precious writing, an intense longing for home and everything involved, is an obstacle ... unless she walked through your path before... Excellent as always!