Failed life.

My feeling of failure in my life.

Failed Life

I have failed her.

I have failed myself.

I hurt her.

I hurt her sister.

I insult her.

I insult her sister.

I am a monster.

I say that I love her but I keep hurting her.

I can't stop it.

I am not myself anymore.

This is no longer Jared.

He is dead.

All that remains is the monster in his body.

Waiting to be killed.

Reviews

[Kshitij Srivastava]

There is a point in life when we get negative and keep repeating our mistakes and hurting people, whom we really cared for, once. Although, i never had to go through such a depressed and insecure phase, I can closely relate with the character in the poem. Emotions were greatly captured and projected. Had a great time reading it ✌

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem direct and honest. I could feel the sadness and disappointment. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to the strong ending. When we hurt another. We do gain the pain and hurt also. Sooner or later. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote