Seeing You Again

Seeing You Again

A Poem by J
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As I've said.True Friendships never end.

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I remember sand boxes and Barbie dolls
When we were 4 years old
A couple of years later
We have stories and secrets told
We eat Ice Cream and other sweets
My mom would give you some of my treats
We were best friends
We were sisters
We'd have campings during summers

One day you left and lived out of town
You said you'd come back
You left me with a frown
Years ,I waited out my window
We'd write letters to each other
I keep one under my pillow

One night I received a letter
It said you were coming back this June
I was so excited
I was going to see you really soon
The next day you came
We were happy,we were the same
Our looks and likes may be different now
But our friendship will always stay
Since then we're still together 
We have this necklace
There written:Best Friends Forever
I'm so glad you came back
I hope you'll never leave again
So that I'll never say these words below 
Again,I'll see you soon my friend

© 2010 J


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I love it. Its an excellent poem, and really represents the true meaning of friendship. I'm really happy I read this!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Its nice you have a true friend, sadly not all of us find our soulmate of friendship. good write :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

A excellent poem. Good friends are rare. Description and story was very good. I like the ending.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 3 people found this review constructive.

I really liked this. I can truly relate to this. I have had 2 friends move away. But any way. I can tell that you really thought this poem out and it came from the heart. amazing lob

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I can really relate to this, and that's what makes it good because I think alot of people can relate to this. Also, it was just a beautiful poem that left you in a happy mood. It was sad near the beginning, but brightened up. Great job :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A really beautiful poem and really decent. Reminds me of my friend :) wait, scratch that... reminds me of my BESTfriend!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is so beautiful, filled with the bittersweet of loss, and the joy of regaining that precious friendship again. Wonderful poetry of the heart!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on December 29, 2009
Last Updated on January 12, 2010
Tags: Friendship, Time

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