Fireflies

I wanted to catch one

They light up at night

So fascinating in my sight

I hope to catch one someday

Whenever I do they fly away

They help me see

What's under that tree

And guide me always

Author's Note

Short coz it's the only thing I've got T____T

Reviews

[Vesa Lee]

It may be short but that's not necessarily a bad thing.
Sometime the greatest and most profound things can be said in one breath. :)

I like this.
It reminds me of all the times I've marveled at the fireflies myself.
Little baby star; I was convinced that's what them must be. ^-^
Lovely write.

[Undying Glory]

really sweet poem. interesting topic choice and i think you really pulled it off on this one. awesome

[Pepsimax]

short and sweet. but still amazing. quite random to some sense but still well done. 100/100