If I wasn't me

Am I not worth anything ?

If I wasn't me what would you do?

Love

Care

Listen

Respect

Trust

Would you?

 

If I wasn't me

Who would I be?

Little Miss popular?

By then I guess I'd be a little bitchy

Would you like that ?

You hate me because I'm just some crap.

 

Go on

Underestimate me

Talk behind my back

But just a fact

By being me

I'm better than that girl you're talking to

Turn around and guess what

That girl's lying to you

She says you're a loser

Nothing but *hit

Now who's better?

Me or her?

 

 

Come on

Don't let her fool you

Come to me

I'll be true to you

Don't underestimate me please

I'll be the best for you

 

If I wasn't me what would you do?

Would you want me?

Or the liar next to you?

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Lies will twist the liar up one day. Best to stand with true feeling and emotion. A excellent poem. Time bring all things forward. I like the flow and story in your words.
Coyote

[Simone]

Hectic, direct and too the point. i love it as you sugar coat nothing. it's wonderfull writing and it ingrossed me. Great job.

[apocalypse]

Strong, direct attacks ..but well expressed

[cest la vie]

Ah a loud spoken word..and so deep..
keep true to oneself and to heck with the poser, liar or whatevers..
Nicely written..

[Jasmine]

wow..the last few lines really finish it well. i dont know what it is about this that makes me like it but i do...the layout and short punchy lines are excellent...keep it up :)