You and Only You

Nothing

You and only you can make me smile

as if I was on top of the world

You and only you can make me cry

as if there was no tomorrow 

 

You and only you can inspire me 

as if I could write 100 poems in 10 minutes

You and only you can see through me

as if I was invisible

 

Why is it you and only you?

Why not the other?

It's simply because 

I'm in love with you and only you

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Love is not something we can fully understand nor control.. once it invades our hearts.. the feeling is there and when or if it's real it's not something we can just make go away.. it takes time for it to fade away and that's only if we allow it.. usually once one becomes involved with another.. over time it fades faster. I loved the honesty running through this.. and yes love can inspire some of the finest work on earth.. so many great love songs were written in tribute to great loves! For 13 you sure did a great job of getting those emotions across.. now if only you could love homework that much.. you could do just anything with that kind of energy and emotions! lol.. I'm joking of course but not! I really enjoyed this one.. keep it up!

[Signet]

It's beautiful... So simple and yet so powerful! I love it!

[ghost writer]

lols, referring to me, or the complication? nvmind. its simple, and beautiful, juz like you.:)

[Darruesh Eetraydes]

I havent felt love like that except once.This makes me long for that again. I enjoyed this very much

[Jenny Nelson]

Really liked this. Sometimes repetition just doesn't work, but in this case, it worked very well to make your point. Nice feeling gotten across in a few words. A very nice write!

[An owl on the moon]

Your words awaken such a feeling of love... that love that inspires, enriches, and sometimes causes the deepest ache as well... The one person who somehow becomes for us like the very breath of life... This is so wonderfully written!

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. No nonsense just the desire of love. A pleasure to read.
Coyote