Eyes of a True Friend

Eyes of a True Friend

A Poem by J
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I dedicate this poem to someone who was once very special to me.Until now she is,but a lot of things have changed.

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I once had a friend

Who was amazing in my sight

She calls me her teddy bear

Whenever I hug her tight

 

Oh how I love her so

I wish we could go back

To times when we were happy

Not times when we were sad 

 

Yes,without saying a word

My friend would already know

That I had a dark and shallow world

And how I needed her so

 

Only we can truly see

What matters with her and me

In the eyes of a true friend

Friendships never end

 

 

© 2009 J


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Great poem! I love it and it sweet and loving. Good job

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A true friend take us for the good and the bad. A excellent poem. We are all a bit crazy.
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Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is really good. I like this a lot, actually. Note: "truelly" (top line of the last stanza) should be spelt "truly". Aside from that, good job. I look forward to reading more of your stuff.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think this is amazing. It has a nice ryhme scheme and a great message behind it. Great read

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I like it, I know how you feel about your friend!

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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