Eyes of a True Friend

I dedicate this poem to someone who was once very special to me.Until now she is,but a lot of things have changed.

I once had a friend

Who was amazing in my sight

She calls me her teddy bear

Whenever I hug her tight

 

Oh how I love her so

I wish we could go back

To times when we were happy

Not times when we were sad 

 

Yes,without saying a word

My friend would already know

That I had a dark and shallow world

And how I needed her so

 

Only we can truly see

What matters with her and me

In the eyes of a true friend

Friendships never end

 

 

Author's Note

What do you guys think ?

Reviews

[lovergirl]

i think that you are totally right when you said :"In the eyes of a true friend , Friendships never end "
this was another lovely poem of yours and so honest . May God keeps all your friends with and near you

[Olivia Ashley]

I LOVE IT!
it shows so much love!


-Olivia

[J]

tama good write

[Dev]

A really good write about friendship which is true and ever-lasting ... really good :)

[apocalypse]

this is really nice in a very chaste way ..your writes arereally honest ..keep writing ..:)

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem. Friendship sometime goes away for a while. We keep them in our mind and heart. I like the story and your flow of words. Ending was excellent.
Coyote

[Jenny Nelson]

Wonderful poem about friendship... true friendship, which is much needed throughout our lifetime. Really nice job with this write!

[MNeilsen]

This is a nice tribute to a wonderful friendship. If only these relationships would always remain forever. Nice write!

[An owl on the moon]

This is such a beautiful dedication to someone who knew you so well and cared deeply for who you were... who you are becoming too... I loved the glimpses of this friendship and the last passage is simply perfect. Excellent write!

[The Cougar's Den]

I think it is a really sweet poem.
Great job!