Between the Lines

Between the Lines

A Poem by jaime
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I'm obsessing on a daydream disguised as a memory.
I cannot disconnect the connection of one time.
A montage scene revealing my private allegory.
A blurry tatoo of you tailgating my mind.

© 2008 jaime


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Ooo. And Ouch. I want to say that you should add to this but that's just me being selfish. It's really not necessary. The first and last lines are quite nice.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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