Just a Wish

about finding the one

I wish he wasn't a man:
I wish he was water.
I would sink in his warmth;
Bathe my soul; soak my wounds.

I would cry hot tears of him.
Trace his path down my cheeks;
Catch him in my palm;
Taste the salt of his presence.

I would drink him slowly in sips.
Quench my thirst for life.
Wet my palette with color.
Paint my canvas with love.

I would tickle my fingers
Across his surface.
Swim in his veins-
my private pool.

I would dive in the deep unknown
Discover secret treasures;
And inhale his mind's steam
Until I drown.

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

how sweet tender words of love
so nice lovely all your words

I wish he wasn't a man:
I wish he was water.
I would sink in his warmth;
Bathe my soul; soak my wounds.

I would cry hot tears of him.
Trace his path down my cheeks;
I would drink him slowly in sips.
Quench my thirst for life.
I would tickle my fingers
Across his surface.
Swim in his veins-
my private pool.
how lovely everything i see here,so tender so sweet
i just loved this...

[Nely Amorim]

this is very emotional and descriptive. I enjoyed the concept of the wording and it flowed so well. thank you for sharing :)