No Vacancy

Sorry I turned on the light

'Cuz there's no vacancy here

No room for another night

No maid service either

So you owe me for nothing

Except for some change

I never asked for anything

To move or rearrange

I'm a recontruction zone

So better watch your head

'Cuz I'm accident prone

(especially in bed)

And I laugh when I'm nervous

And you make me laugh

I'm a work in progress

And you

My first draft

 

 

Reviews

[M. E. Lee]

This is so pretty. The writing is pretty good.

[Cah]

No, this isn't cheesy at all. Ok, so the "work in progress" thing has been done and done but the writing here is good. I like the tone and your rhymes are solid without being too in-your-face. I think this is a respectible write. Well done, if cliched.

The aside is good too.

[jaime]

bah, this one's so cheesy. :)