I already love you

Yahoo! It's my first entry!

I'm not sad

‘cause you're not here yet;

I'm not crying

‘Cause you're far away

 

I want you

to have fun, to make love

I don't want you to care.

Not yet.

 

You know that

when you get here

I will love you

just the same.

Reviews

[AbsentElements]

A short but very sweet poem. It expresses a point through powerful words. Great write

[J. Alexis Balaguer]

I dearly believe that this is a sweet take on destiny.
We all know the existence of 'the one', so time cannot hinder the wait.
It's sweet in its brevity. Nice write Jai!

[Jai]

Aww thanks Rach! :) Yep, exactly what I wanted to convey. :D

[rachielle]

This reminds me of Michael Buble's song "Haven't Met You Yet". I like the fact that your poem had so much faith and innocence in it. Poems like these make people believe in destiny again. Good one:)