safe.

safe.

A Poem by jaide
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take it how you want

"
it shatters and falls apart
months and months of fixing yourself gone.
you didn't feel secure in feeling happy;
but sadness is always safe
the comfort in your own tears makes it hard to drown,
the peace in your own blood makes it hard to bleed out. 

© 2023 jaide


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i loved this piece.
these two lines hit me hard:

'the comfort in your own tears makes it hard to drown,
the peace in your own blood makes it hard to bleed out.'

{beautiful wordplay.}

Posted 11 Months Ago


We feel safe in what we know. Emotionally charged. Sorrowfully written.

Great read.

With love

Matthew

Posted 12 Months Ago


jaide

12 Months Ago

thank you so much
Emotion. It's either an opium to drown in, poison that kills the soul or fuel to power the spirit on the inside. This poem is intense

Posted 12 Months Ago


jaide

12 Months Ago

in the end, we should always learn to make our emotions fuel to power us no matter how much struggle.. read more
Akinlolu

12 Months Ago

That's exactly the point, my friend.

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jaide

St.Johns, Newfoundland-Labrador, Canada



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