Butterfly

Butterfly

A Poem by Jadey
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This is a haiku dealing with butterflies

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Wings of velvet hues

Simple yet elegant, flying

fluttering sweetly

© 2008 Jadey


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Thank you I love how much you can say with a haiku

Posted 16 Years Ago
A very nice piece. You painted a lovely picture with just few words

Posted 16 Years Ago
I love this poem.

Posted 16 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is a great Haiku, your last line ties into your title perfectly, I am also a writer of Haiku, so I appreciate this form, very nice.
Antony

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this. Very good haiku! I love butterflies!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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 Added on May 6, 2008

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