May 26, 2010

She... feels for him.

May 26, 2010

 

She ponders upon your beautiful eyes

She weeps as she wonders

Wonders if you feel for her

As she does for you

She knows you mustn't

She knows you can't

Your pale blue eyes,

Her ticket to life

The reason she smiles everyday

Is the sight of you every morning

She knows just how she feels

But she knows,

Knows you wouldn't feel the same

Author's Note

I like all comments soooo feel free to tell me whatever you think.. :]

Reviews

[Kyle]

Well I loved it.
I bet a lot of people relate to this.
:3 we all must have felt something like this before (girls that is :p)
and hehe love the pic.
I drew a pic like that before yay for anime emo/scene people. Even though Emo's better than Scene XD
I'm to random tonight.
But I like it, as always another wonderful wright from chu, my friend.

[A.r. Bazian]

this is strong... emotionally! still maintaining a lyrical theme... i like!

[(:]

It's so beautiful.
I can relate, and that's great:)
But, Jade it is a very good poem, I love it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime we never know what may lay behind a smile. Sometime we fear rejection and lose the opportunity. I like the poem. Being young and hopeful are the best days in a life. Complete poem was very good.
Coyote