Insanity

My damp eyes are your clue

That I am feeling just a little blue

 

My broken heart cannot be sealed

Cannot be remotely close to healed

 

Little pieces chip

My scarlet blood just drips

 

It's invisable to you

If only you really knew

 

I wish you could feel my hidden pain

You'd wonder what kept me sane

 

Too bad though,

I'm not sane, just so you know

Author's Note

Again, I'm not great at rhyming poems but I'm working on it so yeah.

Reviews

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I think it's good. The rhyming makes it sound like it's not as serious as it actually is:]

[Dom]

This was a good and I thought that your rhyming was fine. Your poem flowed very nicely. Well done. :)

[Alicante lullaby]

pain..lots of it...