You,

She weeps,

Knowing you don't love her,

She dies,

Wishing you would hold her,

You killed her,

And I speak to you,

Knowing you don't care,

You know you don't,

And so do I,

You ruined her,

Broke her heart,

In so many pieces,

Nothing will repair her now,

And it's you,

You did this to her,

So she sits alone,

Wanting you to love her,

But we both know,

You're laughing inside,

Until that night,

While you're sleeping,

Having sweet dreams,

She will haunt you,

Torture you,

So you'll hear her sorrowful screams,

And feel her pain,

Her love,

Her broken heart,

And now you will know,

Just what she felt,

It's all your fault,

You wouldn't play with her,

So,

You wanna play now?

Author's Note

I don't really know... o.O.
Anyways, tell me whatcha think please!! :]
Review please, please please and just tell me and I'll return the favor :]

Reviews

[Emo_Girl]

I luv chu and I love it

[A.r. Bazian]

not THE POEM... but the emotion is very intense... its very VERY creative
i like it

[(:]

That was creepy, and I though it was about a girl being heartbroken until the last two lines. :)

[E. R. Rawding]

wow, it was great. full of broken hearted emotion (from the girl) and pure, vengeful anger (from the author)

also, idk if you meant it, but the ending reminded me of Saw

[Michael X]

Wow, I thought this was magnificent, creepy, stephen king could have written this idea, its a prisoner of sorrow and screams, a raging suffering said in tears and a sudden heartbreak all in one, awsome job, keep it up!

[Daydreamer54]

At first i thought it was about a girl who had her heart broken that was until i read the laST STANZA AND I THOUGHT IT WAS ABOUT A DOLL... aNYWAY THIS Is KINDA CREEPY, BUT in a good way. kinda dramatic. :)