Take Me

Take me
Lead from this hell
We call reality

I need to get away!
I can't live it anymore!

 

Save me

I'm lost
Take me somewhere safe
Lead me in your arms

Hold me close,

So I won't break

 

I have to escape
This hell
I can't live it anymore!

Please,

Take me in your warm embrace
For I'm shattered!

 

Please take me away
Steal me from this place

Just get me away!

I begging you!

This hell is drowning me

In fire

I'm shattered,

Please help me

Pick up the pieces

 

By:  Jade M. H.

Author's Note

Just something I wrote...it was like in 5 minutes so be gentle, please? I wrote it because this is trully how I feel so please don't be harsh.....

Reviews

[Daydreamer54]

I like it. It kinda reminds me of Avril lavigne's song "I'm with you." Idk why though. Great poem! :p

[(:]

How you feel about what?
It's very good, by the way:)

[Jessica]

I like it. I feel like this a lot lol...
Great write! I like the feeling in it.