Spring's Truth

So...I got tired of all the happy spring peoms I have had to read in class so I wrote one on what I think. Looking from the dark side.

Spring has come

My dear

Filling skies with clouds of gray

And lifeless souls weep

To the sounds of songs bird

As waters dance

To songs unheard

Caressing one's skin

With a cold touch

Leaving puddles on the ground

Once so hard and cold

Becomes one's filling tears

Yes it is here

Darkest of all

My dear

Spring is here

Author's Note

So...I was in class reading E.E Cummings poem "In Just-" and I got irritated by how happy it seemed because I don't really like Spring. Pollen gets in my nose and gives me a headache so here ya go. Hope you enjoy :]

Reviews

[A.r. Bazian]

now, out of what i read, this is the most well-structured piece of yours, and is very nice!
keep 'em coming... i dont like spring either... but i'd prefere it over summer, if it only wasn't for the Pollen as you said!

nice work

[Jessica]

Aww but spring is supposed to be a happy season! New babies, flowers, sunshine, warmth.
Good poem though. I like the emotion and imagery. Keep it up :)