If you could hear me now

If you could see me now
You'd be so proud
Of the young woman I have become

If you could see me now
You'd be so dissapointed in me
From all the bad choices I've made

If you could see me now
You'd love me for who I am
And not what I try to be

 

If you could see me now
I wouldn't have to write this to you
I wouldn't have to tell you what it'd be like

 

I miss you so
You're big belly
You was my pillow

Now you're gone
And I miss you
I've cried over you so

I wish you could see me
And look at me with those goofy eyes

And tell what you could see

I wish you could tell me just how proud
And dissapointed
You was

I wish you were here
To watch me grow
But you are not

You left me
Everything you left
And I miss you

But I can't wish you back
Back to the pain and suffering
Even though, I miss you so

Author's Note

It's about my uncle...

Reviews

[A.r. Bazian]

... intense, emotion... a confusion... structure (i think) needs a bit of reformation... but all in all... its good!