Yours No More

Breathe while your lungs are still yours
Live while your heart still pumps
And pulses sweet, red blood through your blue veins
Because they'll control you
They control your mind, body, and soul
So run while you can
Before they come after you
...too.

Author's Note

I wrote this...I'm not sure why, I just did.

Reviews

[Ryan]

This Is Amazing. Period. It really reminds me of something from the book "The Devouring" which was great btw, but very well written. Good job :)

[L.I. Black]

Quite awesome, I say this too much but it's another that reminds me of The Book of the Sinner.
What I really like about it, is it can pertain to any number of things. To one person it could be talking about government to another it could be about Christianity or any other religion...for that matter it could be the demonic cheerleaders at your high-school. It all depends on the reader's point of view.
In my opinion that makes it a wonder poem.