Thy shooting star

Random

I wish upon thy shooting star
For I must get away
From this living black hole
Dropping me farther and farther
Into the night
Thriving upon your touch
To lift me up
To get me away
And out...of thee

Author's Note

random...I'm not sure if I like it...Do you??

Reviews

[BjH]

you get full marks from me as you are the first yank i have ever seen use "Thy"
well done and i agree with jemane
as his comments are safe and generic

[Jenny Nelson]

Short, descriptive, too the point. It does provoke and mood. Ya', I do like it. Sometimes quick thoughts make the best poems.