Betrayed

I sit and think
Of what I did
To make you
Betray me
I made you promise
That though it's been a year
You won't leave me alone
You lied
I'm alone
No one to talk to
No one to acually care
I relied on you
You broke your promise
The promise that left a little hope in me
The promise that made me think
You acually cared
You said you would stay my friend
No matter what
I guess you are a better liar
Than you led on
I trusted you
But now that trust is shattered
"It takes years to build trust yet seconds to destroy it"
And I know it's true
I thought you were true
Not like the others
Two Faced
But know I'm not so sure.
You betrayed me.

Author's Note

I acually was listening to Welcome To My Life by Simple Plan It's my theme song...and I bet the person this is about could guess it was them. They have before.

Reviews

[Fran Marie]

I can feel the pain coming thru~ in this poignant piece

well expressed with deep emotions

Thanks for sharing it in the MM Contest!!

[(:]

Is it me? I believe so. I know I haven't talked to you in a long time. And I'm sorry for that. Here are the reasons I haven't:
1. I have been spending time with my cousins, so I couldn't get on myspace.
2. My cellphone broke (but I have a new one now, if you have any desire to talk to me.)
3. I don't know your number, so I couldn't call you.
Of course, there shouldn't be any reasons to why I haven't been talking to you. But, I have been dealing with some problems of my own (still am). Anyways, I didn't know it would hurt you so bad just to not be talking to you. I'm used to not be talked to, so I had no idea. :/ I'm sorry Jade.

[Jessica]

NIce poem. You can feel the feeling and pain.

What's wrong Jade?