Crying in pain

As I sit
And cry in pain
I cry in your pain
I feel for you
I wish for you to
Be happy
And not suffer
For I am
Scared
Of what to come
I understand
If you must leave
But I shall miss you dearly
I wish for your
Pain to end
And suffering to pass
Even if that may mean
For it all to end
I think it through
As I sit and
Cry in pain

Author's Note

I wrote this about someone very close to me so please no bad reviews...

Reviews

[Lunar Pup]

I really like this poem its different but I understand it. I think that your lines like
"I wish for you to
Be happy
And not suffer
For I am
Scared"
the lines "I wish for you to be happy" can go into one line and same with the "For I am scared" with the lines like that it makes it look more flow easier and makes it easier for the reader to understand the concept... This of course is just my oppinion on the work I've seen.

[TeenRomance]

Very nice. It's sad, but I liked it.

[Maylea]

That was really good. I'm not expert in poetry but I think you could make it deeper if it was a little longer. But overall it was really well done. It's one of those poems I can put myself in because I see someone that I know when I read it. Good job I really liked it.