Hidden

In the darkest of shadows
Lie many secrets
For which are not to be revealed

In the darkest of shadows
Vampires dwell
And werewolves silently howl at the full moon

In the darkest of shadows
Ghouls wander
And ghosts roam

But a young girl makes on
Mistake
She curiously wanders into the shadows

Vampires stare in thirst
Werewolves growl in
Hunger

Ghouls halt in curiosity
Of the human girl
Ghosts watch in anger

The human girl
Must be stupid
Not to scream

For a frenzie
Is about to begin
Because of her

Crazed Vampires
Hungry wolves
Both predators of the night

Curious Ghouls
Angry Ghosts
Both wanderers of the shadows

The girl blinks
As if the figures before her will
Dissapear

Children of Night
And Predators of the Moon
Advance toward her

Her face contorts in fear
Finally afraid
Of what's in front of her

Soon the frenzie
Will start
And the peace of dark will be gone

What a stupid human girl
All because she was curious
Her life may end

Will they know
She is missing?
Gone?

They will wonder
Looking for traces
As to where she went

But of course
They will find
Nothing

As the monsters
Come close
She tries to run

But the vampires
Are a little
Too quick

She screams
Out of what?
Fear of pain?

And the frenzie
Of the beasts
Begins

The peace
In the darkest of shadows
Is gone

All because of one
Stupid little
Human girl.

Author's Note

I was bored xD

Reviews

[Twilight]

Perhaps, the writer is being a little modest? Either way, this is better than many examples of dark poetry, which I have read on this site (and elsewhere). It was interesting to read, and I liked the concept of an innocent girl awakening the wrath of beasts, for instance.

I could not help, wondering who the protagonist is supposed to be? Particularly, in view of the fact, that she emphasises that the "little girl" is a human. Interestingly, the little girl's curiosity, seems to be all which brought her into such a dangerous scenario - menaced by the threat of ghouls, vampires, werewolves and ghosts.

Thankyou, for sharing this with your fellow Group members!

[Emo_Girl]

i remember when u wrote this

[Sean M. Addams]

i like the darkness of this piece... the imagery is flawless... overall very nice job on this one....