Do you love her?

It is about couples, young and old, that are around me. I see girls crying. Guys with hurt eyes. They claim they love eachother. Is it true?

One question runs through my mind
Do you love her?
Stare at her
With eyes filled with emotion
Is it love?
On and off
Your relationship is
Do you love her?
One wrong move
May shatter what you have with her
Do you care?
Maybe
Yes or no
My question is...
Do you love her?

© 2009 Jade (insanity)

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Kyle	:3 I liked it. hehe Posted 14 Years Ago :3 I liked it. hehe Rating /100

Boris Jonathan Novak

Straight to the point writing. You did well. Keep up the good work!

Posted 15 Years Ago

17thWhitePrince

Very very nice ...
Well written ...
I liked it :)

=D

Posted 15 Years Ago

(:	It's good. I don't think you write a lot of poetry about love. It's awesome! ^^ Posted 15 Years Ago It's good. I don't think you write a lot of poetry about love. It's awesome! ^^ Rating /100

Gregory Hill

Hmmm, Interesting, I really like where this is going, you might want to make it flow a little better and rhyming would be nice but I like this poem already. It could be made even betetr though.

Posted 15 Years Ago

Jade (insanity)

Do you love him???
Do you love her???

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on April 29, 2009

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Jade (insanity)

You're beautiful. It's society that's fucked.

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