Dark side of the moon

Thanks 'XxXherHeartXxX' for the idea!

Sadness hiding behind her eyes
The reasons so unknown
Until she cries

She feels so alone
Like the dark side of the moon
It is as unknown

Her eyes hold so many secrets
Secrets which will not be told
Which no one will quiet interpret

In a corner
She sits alone
It is her corner

Warding you away
She is alone
Just as she will stay.

Reviews

[Lucy Joan]

Interesting structure. The emotions seem genuinely expressed, and the simplicity of the whole make it an enjoyable read. Wonderful poem ^^

[K. Carver]

Hmm. Very nice.

[Ama May Cooper]

A very deep and descriptive peace that i am glad to have read. Beautifully crafted and wonderfully woven. Loved it

[Twilight]

A flawless rhyme scheme, and some fine imagery! This is the first of your poems, which I have read. I noticed in the brief description, that you were inspired by an idea from another writer. Even so, this is a true poem, in terms of the format and structure.

It's a slightly morbid poem, making it a suitable addition to our "Dark Poetry" Group. The main theme, includes references to being alone, the dark side of one's personaility, secret knowledge and sadness. Thankyou kindly, for sharing this with us! Also, it's always great to see a new member in this Writing Group, who appreciates that fine dark poetry, does not really need, any references to explict violence, sex or the Satanic! Keep reading, writing and sharing your work with us!

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That's really good.
Last line is the greatest. :] Luff it.