First Look

It was about my bestes friend. Though, it did not work out, it was okay. You are not a bad person Courtney!

I watch you watch him
I see the look in your eyes
Sight of him so dim
'Till his feelings finally arise

So sweet
You two are
Such a treat
Like staring at a star

All suddenly flicker to life
You see each other looking
Wish not to cut like a knife
For how long it took for that one look.

© 2009 Jade (insanity)

Author's Note

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17thWhitePrince

Nicely written piece of poetry indeed !!!
Liked it and understood it all !!!
Really really beautiful :) :D

Posted 15 Years Ago

Bran the Broken

Interesting and sweet...but i don't get the last two lines. they seem a tad clunky...not sure what you're trying to get across with that.

Posted 15 Years Ago

(:	I'm a horrible person, you must know that by now. :/ Posted 15 Years Ago I'm a horrible person, you must know that by now. :/ Rating /100

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Added on March 31, 2009
Last Updated on April 1, 2009

Author

Jade (insanity)

You're beautiful. It's society that's fucked.

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