She feels...

Unnoticed, she feels
Alone, she feels
Sad, she feels
Mad, she feels

All the time
Unnoticed
All the time
Alone

All the time
Sad
All the time
Mad

Laugh at her
All you want
You, dear sir
Will be one she haunt.

© 2009 Jade (insanity)

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Emo_Girl

i love this

Posted 15 Years Ago

17thWhitePrince

WoW !!!
Who Would Dare Laugh At Such A Person Like That ???
Not I !!!

A Great Piece Indeed !!!
Wonderfully Well Written !!!

Posted 15 Years Ago

Michael X

whenever I come across this particular form, it brings back memories, I just don't see it much anymore,
and its classic wordsmith, wish more people would use it. this is heartfelt and well written
and expressed, you did a great job in pulling the meaning and sculpting the wording, keep it up

Posted 15 Years Ago

Alone Tonight

simple yet very powerful I like it a lot.

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Will be one she haunt"
Haha, I like that line. :)
But should it be, "Will be the one she haunts"?
Buts its your poem. :)

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LEX!S

i love it, it's mysteries and simple

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on March 28, 2009
Last Updated on August 14, 2009

Author

Jade (insanity)

You're beautiful. It's society that's fucked.

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Be a girl with a mind, A b***h with an attitude, And a lady with class. I solemnly swear that I am up to no good. If you can't do anything about it, laugh like hell. I like to cuddle. Smar.. more..