An empty glass

Lonely soul

Empty glass filled with air
Invisible but it's there

Packed with vacant space
Longing for water to be placed

Weightless but unbearable
Untouchable and inexplicable

Empty glass filled with air
Yearning for water in despair

Reviews

[Samuel Dickens]

I must be careful about drawing conclusions, but it seems the empty glass might represent something else, like a person, or maybe even the author. At any rate, it's a very nice poem.

[Sasha]

Oh, lol. I took this way too literally until I read your description. I was like, "This is a really serious poem for a damn glass." The third stanza makes much more sense now. Good job.