Good Bye

I'm hurt
I'm scared

It's not easy
And It's dangerous out there

Closing my eyes
I weep and cry

Saying good bye
I want to die

Twisting in pain
This is the end

Reviews

[Vincent Esprit FMI]

The emotions are pwoerful in this piece.....great write again Jade

[Morning Star]

Wow your words truly captured your sadness
and emotions your words paint a canvas of the
Pain of saying Goodbye
Brilliant write!
Hugesssss...Yolie

[SetApartGirl]

This makes me want to hug you *hug* You captured the emotion brillantly in your piece and it is never hard to say good bye.