The Girl I Love

I love her... she'll never know it.

 

A jealousy unknown to me
Born from my love for her.
When she walks by, I can't deny
This girl makes my heart stir.

 

She makes me feel so many real
Emotions I'd refused.
One single girl; she's my whole world.
She leaves me so confused.

 

I feel my heart beat twice its part
To make her understand
To hell and back, I'd walk the track
So I could hold her hand.

 

And when her eyes look through my guise,
I swear my heart could melt.
But if her tears belie her fears,
A blow my heart is dealt.

 

My heart could break, my smile fake,
My tears upon my face.
Her smile seen, kind and serene,
Tears gone without a trace.

 

I can't explain just how much pain
This one girl puts me through.
My broken soul, she early stole
Yet still she seems so true.

 

Don't tell me of the "puppy love"
That kids all think they find.
I'll keep the fight and hold her tight
Until I call her mine.
                            ♥

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Great work.. I can really feel the emotions you put into to this piece! Flow is great and the choice of words are pefect.. we all have had these secret crushes or loves.. I prefer to say crush only because the emotions are that more of lust.. where as love is something that takes time to develop.. it's also taking the good with the bad! Thank you for sharing.. keep working on your writing.. you are pretty good!!!

[A.J.]

Very beautiful, your heart really comes through. Just one thing, always check and double check your spelling. You mispelled "refused" in the sixth line.